Brian's Day

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Re: Brian's Day

Post  Mr Ed on Sun Jun 17, 2018 5:23 pm

Hey! I recognize that clock! It's been in half the classrooms I've been in. The hour hand never quite syncs up with the minute hand. :-)

Love Dawn's expression in panels 6 and 8. Both of them look great together in panel 8!

You do a really good job with your cameo illustrations, Ellen-Natalie! You always make everyone look so nice.

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FE Page 586 Sneak Peak

Post  Ellen-Natalie on Thu Jul 05, 2018 9:08 pm

Thanks, Ed ^^
Here's a peak at the next page:

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Post  Mr Ed on Thu Jul 05, 2018 10:39 pm

Oh, I'm really going to like this next page!   Embarassed

Considering the type of kiss, and its placement, I think a sound effect other than "smack" is in order.  I'm just not sure what would be better.  Certainly not "boop"; but possibly somewhere in between?

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